Talk:John Trobaugh

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[edit] "Why?"

Why? Artsojourner 17:07, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

Why what? -- Hoary 06:41, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Need for radical editing

The article isn't badly written, but it's followed by a couple of things that are formatted as lists but that look like series of chunks awaiting digestion. I suggest that somebody knowledgable about this photographer should digest the chunks and -- oh dear, let's not take this metaphor too far down the alimentary canal -- integrate what's valuable within the main text of the article. -- Hoary 06:41, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

I'm still digesting some of his information. There seems to be more than I bargained for. I will try to work it it more. Thanks Hoary! Artsojourner 16:25, 5 March 2007 (UTC)