Talk:John Keegan

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Contents 1 Some trimbacks 2 Fleshed out article, noted some unsourced statements, etc 3 My edits 4 Quotes in italics? 5 Iraq war section

[edit] Some trimbacks

Hello,

I believe that some of the editors who have recently been working on this article are perhaps not fully informed concerning the Wikipedia's policies.

First, we follow the principle of Neutral Point of View: you can report what public participants in a controversy have said, but you can't endorse any particular point of view yourself. I trimmed back some material by what looks like a person who's quite angry/indignant concerning Keegan, because, it's just not acceptable, according to our policies, to attack Keegan on your own. Please note that I left in material that is properly attributed to published sources; this material is legitimate. Any further criticism of Keegan should follow the same mode.

I also removed material that looks to me like it's redundant. I encourage editors to read over the existing article carefully before editing, to make sure that your contribution will not repeat what is already said.

Yours sincerely, Opus33 23:02, 8 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Fleshed out article, noted some unsourced statements, etc

The "Life" section fails to mention why Keegan has never served in the military or seen combat. His has congenital deformity (of the foot if memory serves). This kept him from conscription in the Fifties and from volunteering. To leave out this information, imo, could lead some readers to conclude, completely unfairly, that he's deliberately avoided military service. Everything in his writings indicate that he would have served had he been physically able.

I fleshed out the article by adding (in parenthetical insertions), in the section on his books, those which cover some of the topics mentioned in the first paragraph. This will give potential readers of his books cues as to which of his books quote what (not everyone, for example, realizes that a title like The Price of Admiralty is a book on naval warfare).

I added a quote of Michael Howard's which is directly at odds with the criticism he leveled at Sir John.

I also internationalized some of the British spellings (e.g. "defence"; give the much larger number of American readers and readers of the American flavor of English, "defence" is going to be flagged, unfairly it's true, as a misspelling).

Opus33 looks to have done a good job at removing any blatant POV. And the critics of Sir John are properly sourced scholarly works. Not mere personal attacks. Well, the attack by this Paret is a personal attack of the baser sort, but it is sourced and not made by a wikipedia editor.

PainMan 10:08, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

OK, mild pet hate. Americanisation os spelling is not internationalisation. Whilst I appreciate your concern that American readers might flag British spelling as incorrect that doesn't justify american spelling in an article about a British author and former staff member at the Academy.

Notwithstanding that the article is not well structured and the latter part about the Iraq invasion is disproportinate considering the volume of Keegans output, and seems to peter out without getting anywhere.

ALR 08:44, 20 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] My edits

OK, I've tightened up further and reduced some of the surplus verbage. We need a list of his works, properly with ISBNs etc, and we need to source the NYT book review and the statement by the third historian. I removed the section on Afghanistan, it was disproportionate and really just a huge chunk of outdated editorial. The Op-Ed piece really just conformed to the Torygraph position on the invasion.ALR 13:32, 20 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Quotes in italics?

Is there a reason why several quotes in this article are formatted as italicized type, rather than between quotation marks? Alki 00:04, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Iraq war section

Interesting that I'm accused of vandalism for removing the Iraq war section previously, however I stand by the comment I made at the time; it doesn't add a great deal of value to the article.

In any case, I've left in the statement of his view on the invasion, and requested verification, I'd prefer a secondary source rather than his Op-Ed pieces. The lengthy quotations neither really supported the assertion or added anything to the content. Contrary to some views the invasion doesn't really dwarf the last 60 years of political history....

ALR 20:24, 5 March 2007 (UTC)