Talk:Jim Holloway

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[edit] POV

This article reads like an advertisement for the fellow. It needs to be toned down quite a bit to meet Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy (WP:NPOV) --AbsolutDan ^(talk) 03:49, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

OK, it's been neutralized. Silentrunner 23:48, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

Thanks it looks much better. I have removed the pov tag --AbsolutDan ^(talk) 01:06, 7 July 2006 (UTC)