Talk:Jessie Bond
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[edit] Originanl comment
I didn't see much information on Bond's life after she left the stage. One article said that she was in Rose of Persia, but that's not right, is it? --Ssilvers 03:54, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Dubious comment
The current edit says that Gilbert never spoke to Bond at rehearsals after her pay raise. This seems highly unlikely. The comment attributed to Gilbert is probably something he said once, not something he said at every single rehearsal.
- Then why not correct it to say that it is something Gilbert is supposed to have said "when she came onstage"? Ssilvers 13:50, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
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- Well, I've rewritten it to something that I think is supportable. Marc Shepherd 14:31, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
- Looks good, but if we are not sure whether he said it once or more than once, you could delete the word "a" so that it is less certain and says that he said it "at rehearsal" instead of "at a rehearsal"? Ssilvers 19:53, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
- Well, I've rewritten it to something that I think is supportable. Marc Shepherd 14:31, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Cut, not just altered
Also, Hebe's dialogue was not just "altered"--her dialogue a substantial scene was CUT. I think it is misleading as written. Would you please put back in that dialogue was cut to accomodate her? Ssilvers 13:49, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
- Done. Marc Shepherd 14:31, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
