Talk:Jesse Merz

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[edit] Tone and content

The tone of this piece sounds more autobiographical than encyclopedic. There is no need to list the subject's complete credits, just the notable ones. The list of "Colleagues, Teachers and Students" needs to be refined - colleagues are irrelevant, and there is a huge difference between students and teachers so whe should indicate which is which. -Will Beback 23:22, 28 May 2006 (UTC)