Talk:James Pavitt

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[edit] Article Cleanup

I tagged this for cleanup; it mostly needs to conform with other biographical articles. Alcarillo 18:09, 13 October 2006 (UTC)

I just did a quick clean, found some sources, etc. I tried to start some categories, but they would probably need to be expanded in order for them to make sense. Alcarillo 20:10, 13 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Too many external links?

I haven't had the chance to go through them all, but I can't help but think that they should be used to expand on the article (and of course cited) and not just listed. It seems the lazy way to do it.Alcarillo 18:20, 16 October 2006 (UTC)