Talk:Jack Holden

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I've tried to cleanup the article a bit. This sort of thing strikes me as "cruft", and from a soap opera besides, but I came across it by accident and decided to edit it. Oh, the shame! Anyway, I removed this bit:

It is suspected that there will be sparks between him and Martha MacKenzie. The two had first met in conflict and Martha swears that she will never forgive him for giving her an unnecessary speeding ticket. When she found out that he was a murderer, she immediately scolded him without hearing his side of the story. After the truth was revealed, she apologises but still finds him to be a "jerk". It is clear that Martha likes him and only time will tell if they go out together.

Couldn't think of a way to clean it up, and felt it couldn't be left in as it is. Someone familiar with both writing in an encyclopaedic style and soapies might be able to tell how to expand this article, but I can't. --fuddlemark 15:25, 21 August 2005 (UTC)

This article is an impressive summary!! For cleaning up the page, maybe it could be done by adding some headings? For example, separating them into groups such as "family" and "love life"? Megan102 02:15, 25 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Articles for Deletion debate

This article was redirected to Current Home and Away Characters as a result of an Articles for Deletion debate. The discussion can be found here. -Splash^talk 00:42, 11 January 2006 (UTC)