Talk:Ion (paintball marker)

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The first paragraph of this article sounds like marketingspeak, not an encycopaedic article. Anyone else agree, or can anyone offer to clean it up? Jouster 00:46, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

I can see what you're saying, however it is very accurate. The Ion is a pretty unique paintball gun...I've never seen a design like it. However, if you can show me what you think is maretingspeak, I will try to work it to be more neutral. Firestorm540 20:18, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

"The Ion's low cost and high degree of customisability make it the leading choice of marker for the beginning tournament player," at the very least, is blatant marketingspeak unless sourced. Jouster 21:14, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

Changed to "The Ion's low cost and high degree of customizability has made it popular among newer tournament players as well as recreational players.", hope that helps! (Sorry it took so long, college & work are killing me) Firestorm540 00:36, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

I agree, I don't have an Ion and I feel like this is a advertisement. I see a lot of the over the top adjectives ("revolutionary" etc.)

see: Avoid Peacock Terms

pmicka 02:58, 2 April 2007 (UTC)