Talk:Invisible Kid

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The last paragraph is pretty vague - did Foccart or Norg almost die? Which one is being referred to? I don't have the books in front of me, otherwise I would correct it. Korvac 15:34, 2 November 2005 (UTC)

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2 out of 4 paragraphs for Invisible Kid II refer to Invisible Kid I: Lyle Norg. This could be given a new sub-heading or perhaps rearranged.