Talk:Intelligent vehicle technologies

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Thank you. Please express 'formal tone' or contribute to the article.

Employing a 'formal tone' on Intelligent vehicle technologies article would make it difficult for common folk to easily comprehend. I have deleted a very good article (Self-recording golf ball, golf ball cup, and reading device) I created because people did not understand it - later I was accused of vandalizing the article I deleted.

Please note contributions from the author (and other Wikipedians) continue to expound on the article and its contents - it also has been suggested to merge the contents of Intelligent vehicle technologies, and Emergency warning system for vehicles with Telematics. --Lperez2029 18:22, 30 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Formal tone

Based upon additional contributions made and the 'informal' nature of the article, I am removing the 'formal tone' notice. Thank you. --Lperez2029 14:33, 10 November 2006 (UTC)