Talk:Integrated Science and Technology

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[edit] Cleanup

This article is certainly an improvement over the previous article that occupied this space, as the old article was a blatant copyright violation. However, this article needs some serious work, if not a total rewrite. Perhaps someone more familiar with the ISAT program at JMU than me can create the beautiful article for Wikipedia that this program deserves. SchuminWeb (Talk) 11:36, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

I second that. This article needs A LOT of work. It's vague and doesn't tell the reader anything about the program or why it's notable. It does sound like an add and possibly in violation of WP:VAIN --Strothra 10:16, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

I rewrote the introduction to sound more professional, and also found a good reference for replacing the "undergraduate program" section: [1]. SchuminWeb (Talk) 22:16, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

Looks good. --Strothra 02:27, 2 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Sounds like an advertisement

No offense but this entire article sounds like an advertisment for the program. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 72.141.157.24 (talk • contribs) .

It kind of does (I didn't write it), but the bad writing would turn anyone off from thinking that they were serious. There was a previous title at this location, but it was lifted directly from JMU's Web site, and so we had to zap it. This new one just needs a little TLC, it seems... SchuminWeb (Talk) 17:21, 9 April 2006 (UTC)