Talk:Insect evolution

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[edit] Sources!

I see this was split out from insect. Well it really needs to cite its sources now. --Cyde Weys 16:46, 3 February 2006 (UTC)

I agree but I'll first have to figure out which they are. Jimp 11:32, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Clarity

Like many articles dealing with scientific topics, this one needs to be rerwritten for the non-expert. There's so much jargon and specialized terminology used with no explanation offered at all that unless you're already versed on the topic, it's unreadable. I'd rewrite it myself, but I'm not sure I know what the article is trying to say. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.163.44.173 (talk • contribs) .

I fully agree with the comment above. I found several sections of this article nearly incomprehensible. It would be lovely if someone who did understand it could rewrite it. OneVeryBadMan 19:04, 5 April 2006 (UTC)

• • • I agree that this article is extremely unclear, but for different reasons. It is not technical terms that make it difficult, but, rather, it is terrible grammar and sentence structure throughout. This article really just need a very thorough proofreading and rewording. It also, as mentioned above, needs to cite sources. Perhaps the Wikipedia tags for an article needing to cite sources and an article needing tone/grammar/clarity improvements should be added? Emtilt 23:39, 1 April 2007 (UTC)