Talk:INSTEON
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[edit] Copyright
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Mike (sig added by Cburnett, please type ~~~~ to add it in the future)
[edit] Cleanup
Thanks Mike for the start on the article. However, it needs to be cleaned up to be much less like an advertisement ("Reliability is a hallmark of INSTEON Networks." is a prime example) and more of an encyclopedia entry:
- Remove marketing POV
- Link in other articles
- Use the standard article format (External links, see also, an intro that explains what INSTEON is to someone who's never known about it or any buzzwords relating to it)
Cburnett 05:18, Jun 22, 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] Warning messages
Hiya, I just added a couple of NPOV warnings to the page, and removed their company banner from the top, since the article does smell very much like advertising. However, I would vote in advance that it should not be deleted or removed, but re-edited (maybe totally re-writen) with an NPOV. --Tyr 80.195.231.235 11:20, 12 August 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Transclusion of competing technologies
I have created Template:Wireless competitors which came from the entry for ZigBee, and am inserting the reference to that template into all the entries that it includes; this should create a fairer, more neutral, and automatic inclusion of all references to all of the competing wireless data networking schemes, whether it's wifi, bluetooth, X10 or whatever. If there's a new one or a better description, it can just be added to the template (or the template changed to update the information) and thus all the competitors have the same reference. Paul Robinson 13:55, 3 December 2005 (UTC)
[edit] cleanup
paul - good table, do you have any more suggestions in order to make this article better?
[edit] Editing changes
Hi, per the warnings and suggestions, I edited the opening paragraph and tried to remove the marketing POV, as well as adding a sentence explaining what INSTEON is to someone who has no idea about this type of technology. Please let me know if the changes are sufficient or if I need to do more. thanks. --Mpleasant 19:00, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] More of the same
Mpleasant reverted my rewrite of the beginning of the article without specifying why. I brought this to his/her attention on their talk page but ve did not respond (it has been 24 days). I am cutting and pasting my original rewrite. I sincerely hope that Mpleasant will join the discussion on this page. In case it is not clear, I feel that the intro is written in purple marketing speak, without addressing the technology's predecessor X10. Codeczero 00:37, 28 January 2007 (UTC)
