Talk:Hurricane Neddy

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Hurricane Neddy was a good article candidate, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. Once the objections listed below are addressed, the article can be renominated. You may also seek a review of the decision if you feel there was a mistake. Date of review: 2007-04-04

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[edit] Moving of quotes section

Noticed the quotes section was removed from "Hurricane Neddy" per editor who says we should use the wikiquote page for such material instead. OK, I support that since it was a logical move, but if the quotes have been moved (don't know if they have), shouldn't a "Wikiquote" tag be added directing users to the place where they now reside? Thanks. [[Briguy52748 22:51, 17 November 2006 (UTC)]]

[edit] GA Review

[edit] Failed "good article" nomination

This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of April 4, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: No. Strings of disconnected sentences, short sentences, lack of flow, overuse of vernacular English.

2. Factually accurate?: Yes. Accurate, there was nothing I could find that was untrue.

3. Broad in coverage?: Yes. Generally although the sections outside the plot synopsis are not large enough

4. Neutral point of view?: Yes.

5. Article stability? Yes

6. Images?: Yes Very good suitable images

When these issues are addressed, the article can be resubmitted for consideration. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you for your work so far. —

The content is there, although it needs a rewrite before it can be accepted as a good article. I've started with the first paragraph of the plot summaryJameiLei 20:52, 4 April 2007 (UTC)