Talk:Hubert Schiffer
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[edit] Confusing
This doesn't read like an encyclopaedia article at all. The first half is an uncritical account of a miracle, the second a rebuttal with a small counter-rebuttal added. It's a rather confusing bit of work. I'll try to research this and improve it. Rosejpalmer 14:05, 6 October 2006 (UTC)
- Not only does it read like a narrative, it also does not reveal anything about Father Schiffer's life/history prior to Hiroshima. More is needed for this article to meet even the barest minimum of encyclopedic standards. --TheTriumvir 01:27, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Incomplete
The article is missing some references and government documents corroborating their story would be preferred. It is simply an account as the priests/followers have documented it. However, that does not take away from the validity of the story. It's simply missing references and/or corroboration. Another way to complete the page is a real counter-argument (explanation) presented with evidence to the contrary. Furthermore, the "Skepticism" comment at the end is simply an opinion, lacking substance, and offers no rebuttal whatsoever.