Talk:Golduck

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[edit] Good article

This article has severe plural vs. singular issues. Half of the time you're talking about it as a species and the other half you're acting like there is only one of them.

Example: Golduck live in fresh-water lakes and in rivers, though it can also be seen occasionally in coastal waters. Golduck are fast swimmers, outswimming even the most athletic of humans because of its frog-like webbed hands and feet. The gem on its forehead glows when it uses psychic powers as well as when it swims at full speed, suggesting that it sometimes uses those powers to swim.

You're talking about a species, but you keep referring to it in the singular tense. Additionally, it is never stated that the plural of "golduck" is "golduck" and not "golducks" (can you even support that it is the plural?).

I cannot pass this article until its grammar issues are resolved. Contact me on my talk page when you've fixed it up. --SeizureDog 09:10, 13 June 2006 (UTC)

• I don't see any problems now that that has been fixed up. Still had to fix a few grammar issues in my reviewing though. Passed. --SeizureDog 07:05, 17 June 2006 (UTC)