Talk:Give Kids The World

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[edit] Tone

Recent edits have added lots of detail in a saccharine, non-encyclopedic tone that's inappropriate for Wikipedia. A few examples:

  • For one week, parents have the chance to see their children laughing and having fun, without worrying about doctors or hospitals.
  • And it all began because one little girl's dream touched the heart of a man who cared.
  • Pamela brings a strong background in community service to Give Kids The World.

These sound like statements from Give Kids The World's own publicity material, not excerpts from a neutral encyclopedia article. The organization has a noble purpose but contributions to the article should be written without the sentimental tone. —Whoville 00:51, 28 December 2006 (UTC)

Confirmed -- this material IS pulled verbatim from the GKtW website (example: [1]. Entire article probably needs to be rewritten. SpikeJones 14:45, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
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