Talk:Florencia De La V

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The English in this article is pretty bad. It has obviously been translated by someone whose first language is Spanish. I suggest that in future they get someone whose native language is English to translate it. There are a few cases of false cognate usage - 'represent' does not have the meaning 'to play the role of' or 'perform' as it does in Spanish. There is confusion between to do/to make in the first line! Also, the spelling error in what should be 'comfortable' shows that the person was simply transcribing from Spanish, as they left the Spanish spelling of this word intact...