Talk:First Focus

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[edit] Notability

To make this article conform to the notability guideline for organisations:

A company, corporation, organization, group, product, or service is notable if it has been the subject of multiple non-trivial published works, the source of which is both:
  • independent of the company, corporation, organization or group itself, or of the product's or service's manufacturer or vendor, and
  • reliable.

you should provide references to such works. The article has a number of links, but they are very haphazardly organised. See WP:EL#How_to_link for the how-to, and see e.g, Gates Foundation for an example on how this should be done:

  • use a few external links in an "external links" section,
  • use as many links as possible as references to support what you write in the article; provide these in the form of inline citations, and
  • format all your links well; you should use the {{cite web}}, {{cite news}} or {{cite journal}} formatting templates for this.

I hope this helps; feel free to post your questions here. Sandstein 18:40, 16 February 2007 (UTC)

I have tried to revise the page and am doing the best I can to understand what you are asking. The America's Promise Alliance is tasking First Focus to lead the effort on expanding health care coverage to children on behalf of the entire America's Promise Alliance, which includes the United Way, YMCA, Big Brothers Big Sisters, and over 80 other national organizations. I don't know how to cite that but that is what has happened.Mcadoo11 04:54, 22 February 2007 (UTC)

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