Wikipedia:Featured article review/Lego/archive1
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[edit] Lego
- Article is no longer a featured article
[edit] Review commentary
Quite an old FA, appears not to meet important criteria.
- lacks inline citations
- needs cleanup and better structuring
- has inappropriate (incl. inappropriately capitalized) section titles
- external links coming before references?
- external links awkwardly formatted
- references awkwardly formatted
- a trivia section is generally not recommended
Todor→Bozhinov 13:00, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
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- Also - did anybody else notice the self-referentiality? Not kosher...This one needs a fair bit of work. The Disco King 22:10, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
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- I agree with the above comments - criteria 2. a. and 2. c. aren't met. Also where is the original featured article candidate page where this article was nominated for FA in the first place? I can't find it. LuciferMorgan 13:26, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
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Talk message left at Wikipedia talk:Wikiproject Lego. Sandy 21:35, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] FARC commentary
- Main FA criteria concerns are writing and structure (2a) and lack of citations (2c). Marskell 10:50, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
- Remove per nom. Todor→Bozhinov 14:00, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
- Remove. Not Enough sources. Hezzy 20:07, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
- Remove per nominator and Hezzy. Tony 15:06, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
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- Message left at User talk:TodorBozhinov. Sandy 03:10, 31 July 2006 (UTC)