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"He sometimes includes electronic instruments and a notable percussion section along with an orchestra, as a combination of tradition and modernity, harmony and rhythm. Dispositional patterns and considerable melodies always come up with the music of the neo-romantic, contemporary composer."

I really, really don't like that phrase and the way that its worded. I'm not sure why... it seems quite un-encyclopedic and slightly POV, though I can't quite place my finger on the exact reason why. Any opinions? - Estel (talk) 08:46, Jan 10, 2005 (UTC)

This article is completely lacking in something that I feel is quite important for an article on a composer - who is performing his work? It doesn't seem possible to buy anything buy him from normal outlets (e.g. Amazon). Can we have some evidence that this isn't the musical equivalent of an unpublished or vanity press author? Average Earthman 19:41, 23 August 2005 (UTC)