Talk:Evolution of the Judiciary in the Maldives

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[edit] Cleanup and Tone

This is a wonderful contribution by User:Deviathan to en.wiki both in terms of fact and length. But it needs some serious attention so as to position it in a more encyclopedic format. At the present stage it has got an introduction which focuses on judiciary system in a very general perspective. Section two and three has more article-specific information and facts. Since there appears to be POV issues (IMHO) and seemingly factual information they'll have to be NPOV'ed and cited, respectively. Last section, Conclusion, should be removed or changed to something else (again IMHO) as wikipedia (or any other encyclopedia for that matter) should not conclude, rather it should try and present the factually accurate information. Reaching a conclusion might often reflect POV.

Since I am not familiar with the subject and Judiciary is not my area of knowledge there is nothing much I can do to improve this article. People who are capable, please do so. --Oblivious 05:31, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

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