Talk:Eva Hesse

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[edit] Toward a more perfect Wikipedia article

This article needs a clearer lead. See: Wikipedia:Lead section. – Autodidact 02:15, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

Ah, much better now! – Autodidact 01:56, 8 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] High schoool

This previously said "After graduating from New York's High School of Art and Design in 1952," which was cited to "Lippard 1992, p.218" It now says "After graduating from New York's School of Industrial Art in 1952" (no citation). I myself have no idea, and I do not have the Lippard book. Can someone please sort this out? - Jmabel | Talk 04:54, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

According to this it didn't change names until 1960, so the correction is correct. I don't know which name Lippard's book actually uses, but it's the same school in any case. —Celithemis 08:34, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

Lippard's book cites HS of Industrial Arts, the correction and the citation are both correct now.Modernist 13:40, 6 November 2006 (UTC)