Talk:Erich Jacoby-Hawkins

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Please do not delete my page on Erich Jacoby-Hawkins. hes a canadian politician in the riding of Barrie, and not a nobody or somebody with no importance. I'm not entirely done however i am close to but i was no where near done when the notice was put on my page. Please consider checking it over now and im adding things afterwards as well.

Thanks.

unsigned comment by User: Political junky, 8 September 2006

PJ, I have undertaken a significant re-write of this article to bring it up to Wikipedia standards, i.e., so that it reads like an encyclopedia article, rather than a biography for a campaign pamphlet. In particular, a Wikipedia article must strive to reflect a neutral point of view. Please review WP:NPOV, WP:BIO and WP:VAIN, three guides that will help you write better articles. The Wikipedia:Manual of Style is also very useful. Thanks. Ground Zero | t 11:28, 9 September 2006 (UTC)

In Canadian political bigraphy articles, we do not commonly provide external links to the website(s) of the political party or parties of which the subject is a member. I have removed the Green party of Ontario link since no evidence is provided that he is invovled in the GPO. I think that the Green Party of Canada link should be removed as well. That link is provided in the GPC article. Including it here smacks of linkspam. I would support retaining the Barrie Greens link on the basis that EJ-H founded it. Ground Zero | t 20:58, 13 September 2006 (UTC)