Talk:Ed Young (pastors)

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This article needs serious rewriting.

I agree. I added the categories a while back and recently the ext links to "reference" the Young pastors. You are correct, someone needs to Wikify this. JungleCat talk/contrib 13:24, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

This article needs documenting and cleaning up.

This article has no sources for any of its claims. Educational records are mentioned ( ed young sr. holding a doctoral degree) but not sourced. Nor is it mentioned if that degree was a matriculated or honorary degree. The rest of the article is also entirely unsourced. The last bit about the Young family being "pioneers in the explosion of modern skateboarding in the city" is controversial to say the least (needs verifiable citations - if any exist). In all - the entry should be at minimum cleaned up and sourced.

In its current state it is a clear violation of biography of living persons policy and should be removed.

67.10.244.209 17:09, 5 January 2007 (UTC) I know for a fact that the Young family did not pioneer the skateboarding industry. The author is clearly in violation of more than just the rules regarding sources. The author has blatantly created a work of fiction here.