Talk:Dorothy Canfield Fisher

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A fine effort, Woggly! Reads very professionally -- you've obviously got talent as a budding encyclopedia writer. The article might benefit from a slightly more chronological ordering (after the lead section noting her significance), i.e., "born", then "educated", then "moved to Vermont", then "married", "book club", "Montessori" and "writing" in whatever the appropriate order might be, perhaps followed after by "honorary degrees", "Eleanor Roosevelt", "eponymous award established", etc., all with dates. It shouldn't hurt to repeat some of the things in the introduction with a little more detail. I'd be interested to know how she encountered the Montessori method, and perhaps in where and how she died (if notable or available).

(I also capitalized BotM club, which deserves its own entry, and de-wikied the second occurence of Montessori -- we don't need multiple links to the same page from a single article.)

Hope that's helpful, -- Catherine (talk) 02:02, 6 Apr 2004 (UTC)

Very helpful, thanks. There is plenty to expand upon, and I'll keep your comments in mind when I do so! --Woggly 07:41, 6 Apr 2004 (UTC)