Talk:Dinesh Karthik
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[edit] GA on hold
A couple of minor things and I'll promote this:-
- Is there any chance you could remove one or two references from the end of the sentence "...affected his posture and balance.[1][3][4][5]" - ie. if they double up on what you're referencing, only include one. Generally, two refs per end of each sentence is the max.
- Some of the references seem to be broken in their formatting.
- Does reference 1 apply to the whole first paragraph? If it does, can you add it again in the middle somewhere; if not, find a reference for the info.
- Does India cricket have an official player profile page? If so, please include it in Ext. Links.
Cheers, Daniel.Bryant [ T · C ]
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- Fixed that too.
- Fixed after random stuff.
- Are you referring to the lead paragraph? All of it is explained below by putting all the main body information together, so I didn't reference it.
- No it doesn't. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 06:20, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- 3. No, the first paragraph of "Early years".
- 4. OK, cool. Daniel.Bryant [ T · C ] 06:22, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- 3. done. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 06:24, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- Cool. +GA. Daniel.Bryant [ T · C ] 06:28, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- 3. done. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 06:24, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
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