Talk:Dilazak

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This article is severely incoherent, and lacks neutrality. --Geracudd 01:47, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Your Comments on my Article

I have spent a reasonable time of my life on this particular tribe. It is just one part of my work. I have three tasks at hand:- 1. A book on History of castes and tribes. 2. A video documentary on different castes & tribes. 3. A simple web site on history.(A trial page can be viewed at http://www.geocities.com/dilazak1. I am 100% sure about accuracy of contents of the article. Please do let me know about your oservations, if valid.

[edit] My Comments on Your Article

I believe the article needs a drastic improvement, this including it's neutrality. You describe the "tragedy" of the tribe rather than simply stating what happened. Thank you for your contributions. --Geracudd 02:28, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

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