Talk:Dan Hsu

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I did some wikifying, but to be honest the recent paragraphs added, while important in the context of the gaming community, look like absolute ass. My grammar fu is not strong enough to deal with the atrocious misuse of commas and terrible sentence structure. I fixed some spelling errors and awful dreadful capitalization, but I leave it to more capable hands to do the rest. 24.62.27.66 02:00, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

I started to re-write this page, but I only made it half way through, I'll continue to edit this, if no one else does, later. Kobyn 22:28, 28 January 2006 (UTC)