Talk:DANA (weapon)

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There are some POV problems with the first paragraph, and it's nowhere noted what country originally designed it - necessary for statements like the first sentence of the development history. Also, in regards to the first sentence, certainly the Soviet [I]SU-152 was earlier - is the development wheels instead of treads? This should be emphasized. I wouldn't know enough, however, to go about researching this. TitoLeibowitz 02:01, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

I fixed the POV thing, perhaps 'shocked' isn't appropriate here, and I've added who originally designed and built it, and while hte Soviet ISU-152 was the first Self propelled artillery gun, it was tracked, not wheeled, so yes, I will try to emphasize it more.

Verdafolio

I've changed the country of origin from Czech Republic to Czechoslovakia, since Czech Republic started to exist only in 1993, after the division of Czechoslovakia.

Wakko

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