Talk:Critical Infrastructure Protection

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This page was substantially different than the alleged copyright infraction. It was in the midst of being edited further when it was flagged. Further paraphrasing is required.

A Temp page has been generated with editing of the orignal text that should fix the problems noted.

[edit] Cycle looks like straight process

How oes it close and repeat? Midgley 03:12, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

The cycle is a continuous process that can end and begin at regular or irregular intervals.FrankWilliams 20:22, 13 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Page needs rewriting

This article is, partly, in need of re-writing. Several sections are not very encyclopedic at all, with a constant use of the first person (especially "we") and opinions written as if they were lifted from a third grader's persuasive essay on the subject.

First of all whoever wrote the above statements should sign their discussions. Second, I don't think a third grader has any notions of the subject which are highly complex. Third, why not contribute and fix that which you think is broken. Not personal just business. FrankWilliams 15:37, 27 October 2006 (UTC)