Talk:Connexions 4 London - C4L

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The article is almost entirely a marketting piece (feels like a copyvio, but it's not from anything online that I can find). It needs to be sourced, and many of the colorful language and claims need to be toned down. -Harmil 16:19, 19 July 2006 (UTC)

Hi, Thanks for looking at this. I have toned this down a great deal. Sorry, this is my first piece on wikipedia. I have included other companies for comparison and linking, and changed so it is just factual information. Please let me know if I need to make any further changes. Regards, Matt --Mathawkins 01:21, 24 July 2006 (UTC)

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