Talk:Connexin
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[edit] Minor comments after a first read
Excellent! Thanks for working on this. I've only read it once through, but here's what I noticed:
- I'd love to see a larger image for the graphic in the structure section, but when I try to access it ... I don't get it. I'm not wise enough yet to know how to fix this, so I'll let you do it!
- When reading I removed and added some commas plus other edit things ... hope you don't mind. If I need to read style pages, let me know.
- I'm confused about this in the nomenclature section: "e.g. Cx26 is the connexin protein of 26 KAMU." A link is provided for the AMU portion of KAMU only. But what is KAMU? (Camus? Ha!) I wonder what the style pages say about e.g. vs. i.e. I'm semi-indoctrinated in APA format. Anyway, maybe a citation would help this section and/or me.
- IMO, we need a reference for this from the Biosynthesis and Internalization section: "It has been suggested that this short life span allows for more finely regulated physiological processes to take place, such as in the myometrium."
- Is there a UR-Golgi intermediate compartment??? Or is this equivalent to the ERGIC in the next bit, which then would beg to be ER-GIC?
- Another bit for your more clever self: A redirect? for "innexins" in the first paragraph, so it doesn't show in red. "Innexin" is nicely set up much later in the function section.
- At a glance, references #2 and #3 look identical to me ...
Keesiewonder 11:28, 18 November 2006 (UTC)