Talk:Concha y Toro Winery

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• In the process of improvement.Charleenmerced ^Talk 00:46, 23 February 2007 (UTC)Charleenmerced

[edit] Some thoughts

Overall not a bad article at all. A very good start. There are couple areas that I would hone in on.

1. Look for some reliable sources outside of the wineries own web pages. This will also help with the POV side as well because you are more likely to get some more objective third party views from an outside third party source.
2. Establish in the lead what distinctly makes this winery notable. (Largest producer in Chile? First winery to do some particular thing, etc)

As for other thoughts, I really like the vineyard section. They provide excellent descriptions-especially since the winery's holding transverse several Chilean appellations. I also think you did an excellent job in going into the wine making technique. Again, overall I think this is a very good start for the article. Agne^Cheese/^Wine 04:13, 23 February 2007 (UTC)