Talk:Commutator (electric)

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Although there is decent amount of text there is a lot of redundancy so I think this article currently still qualifies as a stub. Specifically the last paragraph of the intro and the second paragraph of Composition of a Commutator are almost identical, but even much of the remaining text is largely a restatement of this same information on how they are constructed. More coverage should also be given to the longevity of the device, its history (both development and use), and something should be said about the efficiency of the device. -AndrewBuck 15:57, 27 March 2007 (UTC)

I rewrote most of the article partially addressing the issues mentioned above but I still think further attention is required. -AndrewBuck 14:14, 28 March 2007 (UTC)