Talk:Columbia University Marching Band

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The article says "The CUMB prides itself on evading university censorship. This thankless task usually falls to a college dean." As written, it suggests that the dean is responsible for evading censorship when in reality he/she is the one who imposes it. I have removed the second sentence for clarification but hope someone else can find a suitably clever way to re-introduce the concept. I added some different text in its place.

The formations in the original birth control show included a chastity belt (accompanied by a stirring rendition of "I Hear You Knocking, But You Can't Come In"), but I don't think they included a diaphragm. I have made the appropriate edit but if someone has better information than mine they should feel free to add the diaphragm as well.

I have made several other edits as well, but I'm not sure I can call them appropriate.