Talk:Chaim Yisroel Eiss
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This article is based on [1]. Since Danubablue's username is the same as the email address given for that page's webmaster, I believe she is probably the author of this text, so I don't think this is a copyvio. I have contacted her to try to confirm that this is the case. — Haeleth Talk 23:22, 29 October 2005 (UTC)
- I have changed my website as you told me. It is OK now.
[edit] Desperately needs to be edited for NPOV and encyclopedia style
I found this article while searching on George Mantello, for whom I hope to create a small stub article that will draw editors for development. The Chaim Yisroel Eiss article at present provides a wealth of content, but doesn't begin to follow encyclopedia style. There is considerable use of first-person POV language, as well as comments like "chief proponent of the don’t-annoy-the-gentiles approach," which may be entirely accurate but is of questionable tone for an encyclopedia article.
Hoping someone with editorial experience AND a knowledge of Chaim Yisroel Eiss can step in and improve the article, which has good raw material. Lawikitejana 16:16, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
