Talk:Center for Advanced Research and Technology
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[edit] Reads like an ad
This article has serious problems which need to be addressed:
- It reads like an ad. All the language is gushing and over-glorifying. Therefore, the whole article is highly POV and needs to be toned down.
- It makes numerous claims that aren't backed up by any references at all. E.g. "is considered by many to be a school of the future." Just who are these "many" people? If there are a lot, it shouldn't be too hard to find a reference somewhere. Lacking such references, the POV claims should be removed.
- It has too much unencyclopedic detail. Wikipedia is not for duplicating other websites. All the information on credits, prerequisates and other details should be removed: such information does not belong on Wikipedia. That information should be on the school's website, not ours.
- It doesn't establish why the school is WP:Notable. We don't want every educational institution listed, just ones that deserve mention.
Lacking such changes, I'll nominate it for deletion. — Frecklefoot | Talk 18:30, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
I will try to fix this article. Plasmoe 05:24, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
