Talk:Bleed the Dream

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[edit] NPOV?

Maybe it's just me, but a presskit bio doesn't seem to be very NPOV. I don't really have the time right now to edit this (nor the inclination; screamo isn't really my scene), but I would suggest that someone who is more inclined to take on such a project edit the biography so that it doesn't sound like... well, a presskit bio. wilhelm 15:26, 17 March 2006 (UTC)Burndownthedisco

Don't worry about it. It was choppy when I first started it, and I have since rewrote their bio in a word document, to formulate some good thoughts and proper spelling. Thanks for paying attention, but I promise to do them justice, and sound more encyclopedic! -- vi 23:15, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

This article is probably the least NPOV article I've ever read on Wikipedia. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 157.89.186.254 (talk • contribs). on 21:54, 6 November 2006

[edit] Brandon's Departure

I will be updating this whole article in the style it is currently written over the next few weeks as the band will announce its replacement for Brandon. I will be watching for vandalism or unconfirmed edits. --vi 04:24, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] I assessed this article

And, I thought the beginning biography read like an essay with a non NPOV. Thanks. Real96 00:27, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Agreed. Seriously needs editing.