User talk:Berserker79/b79sandbox

[edit] Comments on F.E.A.R. Story

Any interested user can leave his/her comments, suggestions, etc... about the new version of the "F.E.A.R. Story" I wrote here. Thank you. — Berserker79

I think it's pretty good, but I have a question regarding to the story section: why are we rewriting it again in the first place? I think someone said that it was a bit fan-boyish. As in too detailed? If this is the case, then perhaps we should think of drastically shortening it and instead post information in different areas (such as in Characters and Organizations) with links ot those areas in the section so that the reader may choose to piece the story on their own. I always thought of plot summaries as just...well.....summarizing. This is just what I think however; I'm probably completely wrong. Delta 20:24, 17 May 2006 (UTC)

Regarding as to what we should do for the story structure, I believe that we should, for now, include a small and brief summary of the plots. We could include links to other sections so that readers can use them to get any other info they might want. In the future, we might want to make an article on the plot, but that may be a bit too much. Delta 20:52, 18 May 2006 (UTC)