Talk:Benjamin Speed
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
 |
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography. For more information, visit the project page. | ||
| ??? | This article has not yet received a rating on the Project's quality scale. Please rate the article and then leave a short summary here to explain the ratings and/or to identify the strengths and weaknesses of the article. [FAQ] | ||
 |
Benjamin Speed is maintained by WikiProject Australia, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of Australia and Australia-related topics. If you would like to participate, visit the project page. | ||
| ??? | This article has not yet received a rating on the quality scale. | ||
| ??? | This article has not yet received a rating on the importance scale. | ||
|
Assessment comments
This article has not been rated for quality and/or importance yet. Please rate the article and then leave comments here to explain the ratings and/or to identify the strengths and weaknesses of the article. |
|||
[edit] Reads like an autobiography
This article needs significant clean up:
- It reads like an advertisement for the subject, only stating positives.
- Its written in un-encyclopaedic tone.
- It lacks references to cretiable third party publications.
I suspect it's an autobiography. See Wikipedia:Autobiography for why this is undesirable. Wikipedia is not an arena to write about how great you are. --AtD 12:57, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
- It was very autobiographical - i have edited it to a more encyclopaedic form. please edit as you see fit. --Mrspeed 22:32, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
-
- It's better now. Be sure to check out the Manual of Style if in doubt over anything like this. --AtD 11:53, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
