Talk:Beneath Nightmare Castle

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Made the article. :-) It's my first and its pretty basic, but at least it's a start. FlamingStarPress 14:10, 13 August 2006 (UTC)

Congrats on your first article!

I've made a few stylistic edits. Here's the rationale:

(i) I've deleted the sentence about including the standard 400 paragraphs. I think such a sentence is only necessary if there's anything unusual about the structure — if it's normal (400 sections, ends in the final section) we don't need to say anything, because that's covered in the main FF article.

(ii) Regarding illustrators, I think we should credit the main illustrator in the text, and credit the cover illustrator in the infobox caption, as per my changes here. That said I won't object if you put Terry Oakes' credit back in the main text, I'm still considering my opinions on this. Whatever, it would be good to add a "cover" thing to the infobox, so as to separate out the illustrators. I'll try to do this (and put a note on Talk:Fighting Fantasy when it's done).

Hope this works for you. Looking forward to your next work! —WebDrake 00:40, 15 August 2006 (UTC)

Second thoughts on the cover illustration thing: see Template talk:Infobox Fighting Fantasy book. —WebDrake 00:51, 15 August 2006 (UTC)

You made the article look much better. I'll keep what you've done here in mind when editing/making more articles for FF. :-) BFlamingstarPress 21:46, 15 August 2006 (UTC)

It looks very good for a start. One simple question - is this the book with Terror/sanity points? I seem to recall that it is, though I will need to check up on this when I get the time....

On the whole though, a good first effort. Better than my first, in any case Noble Kale 23:36, 28 August 2006 (UTC)

Yep, there's a Willpower value. If the player has a Willpower below 6 and then unsuccessfully Tests their Willpower, it's game over. Noble Kale 08:47, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

If the book uses a unique rule then that needs to go into the article. I don't have a copy of this book available, so could someone who does please put it in? Euchrid 15:55, 16 September 2006 (UTC)

Can we reference the comment that some of the original artwork was banned for being too gruesome? —WebDrake 10:45, 17 September 2006 (UTC)