Talk:Beldum

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[edit] NPOV problem

This article is clearly does not have a neutral point of view. If you want to know why, it repeatedly uses words and phrases such as "cute", "too bad", and "Beldum is quite cute" (the last one is also repetative), and it has an exclamation mark where it doesn't seem appropriate. I'll mark the regions of offending text, and edit some of it myself. - Bulbaboy 06:16, 12 Jan 2004 (UTC)

Problem solved. - Bulbaboy 06:29, 12 Jan 2004 (UTC)