Talk:Battle of Khe Sanh
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[edit] Wikipedia standard abbreviation for United States
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (abbreviations), the abbreviation for the United States is U.S., not US. Please do not revert it back. Thank you. — ERcheck (talk) 17:05, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
To revert IS to go back - to "revert it back" is redundant.
Mark Sublette 09:32, 29 November 2006 (UTC)Mark SubletteMark Sublette 09:32, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
Is this article done yet? Thank you. RM Gillespie 00:00, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
- No need to be so defensive all the time. I know you have put a ton of time and effort, researching and writing this article but all of the editors here are also looking to make the best article possible. Please work with them. Cheers.--Looper5920 00:05, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
Defensive? You mean the "editors" that have altered cited material to insert factually incorrect information into this article? And when they are caught at it will not admit that they have goofed? You mean the "editors" that (in order to promote their specific agendas) reduce the text to goobldygook? What you do with an article once it is done, I could care less. Make it the Confederate States Army vs. the Tai Ping Rebellion for all I care. But wait until its done. I suggest that you take a look at the history of the Vietnam War article. I would have been willing to continue the work I put into it (including footnoteing that entire monstrosity), but I got so sick of being rode herd on by an "editor" that I simply abandoned it.
All of the major articles that I have produced have gone up for an A-Class review (where US would have become U.S.), so my stylistic eccentricities (shared, by the way, by the US government) would have been removed. Sorry for the rant, but I'm just tired of it. You don't want the work done, just say so. I'm just very curious why some editors, who seemto be so content protective, haven't written the articles themselves. Ah, but that is not going to happen, is it? RM Gillespie 10:12, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
- Your "rant" (as you termed it) is misdirected in the case of the initial request — not reverting the U.S. back to US. My edits to this article have not been to insert incorrect information, nor have they been to "reduce the text to goobldygook". Concerning the use of US versus U.S., please note that the Marine Corps Historical Center Writing Guide, Revised Edition 2004, on page 1, indicates that the abbreviation to be used for United States is U.S. The USMC publications actual names, as published by the USMC, have U.S., not US, in their titles.
- Though your feeling "ownership" of the article is understandable, we do not own our contributions to Wikipedia. This article has obviously been a major effort on your part and will be a valuable addition to Wikipedia. Since you seem to feel that you do not want edits by others while you are working on the article, may I suggest that, for future major articles such as this, you create the article in a user subpage/user sandbox and then move it to the mainspace when it is complete. If you are interested in collaborating with other authors during the creation of the article, you could invite them to edit on your user subpage.
- As for your comment "Is this article done yet?" — the template {{Inuse}} is available to put at the top of the article. Please note that the intent is not to be a "hands off" notice, but rather while you are online and editing, to prevent those annoying edit conflicts that occur while two editors are working on the article at the same time. — ERcheck (talk) 13:58, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Thanks ERcheck
I guess you missed the point of the exercise. Oh, well. The subpage and in use could be handy. RM Gillespie 18:23, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Assessment
Looks quite good. The last paragraph in the article seems unnecessarily speculative (of the original research variety), though. Kirill Lokshin 19:16, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Nit-pickin'
Seems to me that the debate over whether to spell it US or U.S. is merely an element of style. I like to conform to the source agency's usage. As for revisionist tendencies by those who edit, but don't write, I would say, make sure you cite your sources if you feel you have better data. I am quoting Lars Olausson's "Lockheed C-130 Production List - 1954-2007", pages 32, 156 for my reference to the KC-130F that burned out on the Khe Sahn runway on 10 February 1968.
Mark Sublette 08:44, 29 November 2006 (UTC)Mark SubletteMark Sublette 08:44, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Introductory section
Comparing the current introductory section to WP:MOS, everything beyond the first paragraph (which concicely descibes, what is the Battle of Khe Sanh), should be moved to a section. I think the second to fourth paragraphs could possibly be moved to a subsection inside /*Preliminaries*/ but they should not remain in the introductory section. Garrie 03:32, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
Have you ever had an article up for an A-Class review? If you do not have a complete synopsis of the contents of the entire article in the intro, you are going to end up a well-known creek in a well-known improperly designed flotation vehicle. This is to provide a casual reader with a "Cliff's Notes" version of the article. RM Gillespie 14:10, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] US vs U.S.
Again please refer back to WP:MOS but the most important issues are
- Consistancy 'within an individual article
- Consistancy within a project
- Consistancy within a regional framework.
As this battle conflict is of interest to quite a few particpating nations (USA, Vietnamese, Australian to mention the first that come to mind) - possibly the USMC style guide isn't nessecarily the best one to use? A broader historical style guide may be better to adopt for US vs U.S. WP:MOS#Acronyms_and_abbreviations indicates U.S. is preferred unless a part of a longer abbreviation it then becomes USN etc. - and in a list of nations it should not be abbreviated at all. HTH. Garrie 03:40, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- For the record, the only reason Australians would care about the Battle of Khe Sahn is that Jimmy Barnes sang a song about a battle in which no Australians took part. --203.10.224.58 04:09, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
Australians did particpate in the conflict as a whole along with quite a few other nations - but correct re this battle in particular which I guess my words came out as saying.... look, I've fixed it... But my point was regarding WP:MOS and the US vs U.S. and the article it occurs in is almost irrelevant Garrie 04:45, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Image of general giap
General Vo Nguyen Giap (left) and Ho Chi Minh (right)
Probably one of the more official photos to demonstrate that the leaders were "simple people". In the pictures I could find of general Giap he is very often shown in civilian clothing among his troops in uniform. Probably this was a trademark of him and I wonder whether we should possibly include this.
General Vo Nguyen Giap in 1946 among Vietnamese troops.
Photo of Giap from the US Air force. Wandalstouring 13:39, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Possible images for use
Recent photos from Khe Sahn that may be of use. I have a few more from inside the museum as well. First is hills 881 N&S as seen while standing on the airfield and the 2nd is what is left of the runway looking west while standing on it.
--Looper5920 11:10, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Neutrality of this article
It is my opinion that this article conveys the U.S. (or US or United States, I didn't read the entire discussion about how to spell it,) point of view only. For example the deeds of the special forces are depicted as heroic (which they might very well be, but on the other hand I don't think somebody aligned with north Vietnam would agree). p.s - I'm neither American nor Vietnamese nor from any country connected with this conflict, which I think allows me to have a more neutral point of view. 85.65.215.115 21:56, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
- That's the usual problem. We hardly have any information from the Vietnamese side. Wandalstouring 22:54, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
- The only blame that can be laid as to the dearth of Vietnamese sources lies in Hanoi, not with the author. The quotes from Victory in Vietnam are the totality of what that work has to say about the battle and PAVN's participation in it. There are no other works translated into English (as far as the author knows), that describe Vietnamese participation.
As to how PAVN/NLF personnel felt about the Special Forces SOG recon teams that opposed them, let me quote NLF Regimental commander Nguyen Tuong Lai: "They effectively attacked and captured our soldiers and disrupted our supply lines. This weakened our forces and hurt our morale, because we could not stop these attacks. We understood that these American soldiers were very skillful and very brave in their tactics to disrupt infiltration from the North." Al Santoli, To Bear Any Burden. New York: E.P. Dutton, 1985, p. 147. RM Gillespie 16:23, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
- Put that quote into the article. Wandalstouring 10:47, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
- Even if it does not pertain to the battle of Khe Sanh? RM Gillespie 15:06, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
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- Sorry, I have been monitoring quite a lot of articles on this Vietnam stuff and didn't realize that I was on Khe San. No, move it to the SOG article. Perhaps quote it there like in the Jeanne d'Arc article with a blue box. Wandalstouring 16:48, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
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- This is by far the best article in relation to the Vietnam War, the most balanced anyone could expect even with the lack of Vietnamese POV. Cheers for the author!!:D.Canpark 23:51, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Fall of Lang Vei
This section is factually incorrect. A-101 camp received the members of a fleeing Laotian battalion BV-33 and refugees, and were warned by them about the use of NVA armour. This led to LAW ammunition being delivered to the camp by USAF before the NVA actually closed to assault the camp.--61.68.97.238 07:50, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
- Fixed the problem. Although forewarned, the SF troops expected that the armour, if used, would only take on a fire support role, not attack the camp directly. As for the LAWs, three-quarters of them misfired. The majority of those PAVN tanks destroyed were knocked out by either recoiless rifle fire or hand grenades. RM Gillespie 16:49, 19 March 2007 (UTC)