Talk:Australian Shepherd/Comments

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Has some good information. The appearance section needs dividing into subsections to importve readability. Needs more references and citations. Temperament section has a somewhat informal tone sometimes ("The Aussie has its own unique smile by showing all the teeth, and often by snorting in a fashion that resembles sneezing"). That quote is a sweeping generalization (I seriously doubt that many Aussies snort and smile). --Pharaoh Hound (talk) 13:47, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

• I dealt with some of this. The whole article needs more basic copy editing. The info that I orginally put into the article on the breed's origin (and cited a reference) now doesn't generally match what's there, but no new reference was added. I know it's all a little vague, but that's why references are particularly important. Elf | Talk 05:54, 18 January 2007 (UTC)

Aussies DO smile,but I dont know if they snort...real good article!