Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Mammoth

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Assessment Article assessment
Extinct mammals
Assessment completed
27 February 2006
5 March 2006
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Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.


Article: Mammoth

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[edit] Review by violet/riga

  • Coverage and factuality: 7
Poor referencing; does not go into detail about its position in the food chain, but seems to cover most other things
  • Writing style: 8
Some informal language
  • Structure: 7
The lead is too short and needs to summarise the article; the sections need rearranging to group things together, using more levels
  • Aesthetics: 7
Could do with one or two more images
  • Overall: 7

Needs some rearranging, but is generally fairly good. violet/riga (t) 20:55, 27 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Review by HereToHelp

  • Coverage and factuality: 5
References are not inlined; general references are non-existant.
  • Writing style: 8
Could use some disambiging of a few technical terms, but otherwise pretty good.
  • Structure: 8
Couldn't find many problems but it didn't jump out at me as fantastic either. Headers could use a little tweaking.
  • Aesthetics: 8
Standard taxobox. Two images seem a bit on the skimpy side making the article seem a little arid with text.
  • Overall: 6.5

Seems mediocre except for the references, which bring this down a lot.--HereToHelp (talkcontribs) 13:57, 4 March 2006 (UTC)

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