Talk:Arj Barker
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[edit] Cleanup-tone
This article reads like a newspaper "lifestyles section" blurb based on a press release (no offense to those who have worked on it so far). I think it can be tightened up quite a bit, but I'd rather have someone who knows the subject of the article do it. - dcljr (talk) 01:59, 12 July 2005 (UTC)
- Did my best about that, but someone with a better grasp on both Arj and Wikipedia style should go over it as well. --Charron 03:08, 20 July 2005 (UTC)