Talk:AOL OpenRide

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[edit] Nominated for cleanup

Sorry this is a little late in coming, but here's a summary of reasons this article needs to be cleaned up.

  • Reads like an advertisement for OpenRide.
  • Incorrect tone of voice.
  • Very little information about the program.

--Jrothwell (talk) 15:40, 9 December 2006 (UTC)

Hi, Jrothwell: I have just edited the article a bit, and added more information, I hope that this will satisfy your concerns. I think it reads a lot better and more like an encyclopedic article now. Do you think it needs further work? I wanted to check with you before I removed the cleanup request tag.

--Rgb9000 17:36, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be updated to reflect version 1.5?