Talk:American Bicycle Association
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Nice article, but I have couple small problems as follows:
This quote: "Rod Keeling, the head of the new governing body that was the ABA company pilot who rose to the rank of Vice President of Marketing" is confusing. Would "Rod Keeling, former ABA VP Marketing, who first joined ABA as a pilot, was the head of the new governing body."
This "This tactic was not new to Mr. Hill. He led a one man boycott of the ABA during the 1980 season" is confusing as well. If it's a one-man boycott it wouldn't be "led" since no one else is in it. Could this be clarified?
"With that the Pro Spectaculars went out in a blaze of controversy. 1985 was the last Pro Spectacular series ever." Yet I've been to the Pro Spectacular race for the last six years. Again, could this be clarified?
Finally, there's a tiny bit of editorializing at various points.
But again and overall, a really nice article. I'll acknowledge this stuff is minor.
