Talk:Alfred Dunhill, Ltd.

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[edit] POV

This article was written by a user called "Dunhillonline", and it kind of shows in the obvious slant it takes. Sarge Baldy 09:11, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

I have already removed all the "advertisorial" - If you have any objections to the present content please can you elaborate? Thanks. --Richhoncho 09:18, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

The opening paragraph reads like a Horatio Alger story. Sarge Baldy 09:46, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

Fair comment, but that's nothing to do with POV. --Richhoncho 09:51, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

I would disagree. I believe it's POV to treat the topic of an article too sympathetically. But I think it's fine now. Sarge Baldy 09:54, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

Much better. Thanks for that. Maybe stub should be added. --Richhoncho 10:23, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

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